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- slimshady_007
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Mob writing
Some people tell me im a talented writer so im wonderin if theres any place where i can write about organized crime and receive feedback. Im choosin to write bout OC since its something i take interest in. Plus i wanna get feedback bout my writing.
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Im talkin bout like a short story type of thing or maybe a biography of a wiseguy. Not a discussion thread.
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First things first, speak and write, properly. Your grammar in general is atrocious.
I strongly encourage you to write. It’s a lost art, a life skill, potential career/s and highly therapeutic.
Write, your life will be richer for it in many many ways.
I wish you good luck.
I strongly encourage you to write. It’s a lost art, a life skill, potential career/s and highly therapeutic.
Write, your life will be richer for it in many many ways.
I wish you good luck.
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That's what I meant. We have an article section here but Villain is really the only one that ever uses it. Feel free to send me anything you may want proofread before posting.slimshady_007 wrote: ↑Mon May 21, 2018 7:57 pmIm talkin bout like a short story type of thing or maybe a biography of a wiseguy. Not a discussion thread.
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eh.... ur non fiction is just as much fiction as its factual, so carry on! write and post it here. first writting due by Fri
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Fiction? No. But if you want to write non fiction short stories and biographies you can put them up in the articles section, like Snakes said. But be prepared to defend them with facts and maybe even sources. They will be reviewed and perhaps questioned.
There you have it, never printed before.
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someone use to post short fiction storiesHairyKnuckles wrote: ↑Mon May 21, 2018 11:25 pm Fiction? No. But if you want to write non fiction short stories and biographies you can put them up in the articles section, like Snakes said. But be prepared to defend them with facts and maybe even sources. They will be reviewed and perhaps questioned.
i remmber one about a guy in prison who got ina fight... and John stanfa was a bum there... etc
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Lmao my grammer aint shit if i have to write something thats supposed to look good.SonnyBlackstein wrote: ↑Mon May 21, 2018 8:38 pm First things first, speak and write, properly. Your grammar in general is atrocious.
I strongly encourage you to write. It’s a lost art, a life skill, potential career/s and highly therapeutic.
Write, your life will be richer for it in many many ways.
I wish you good luck.
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You either need to work on your grammar or have a proof reader. I can't get through more than a couple sentences with the way you type let alone a story lol
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Trust me, when i write a story i write properly. I type on this forum the way i text peopleFughedaboutit wrote: ↑Tue May 22, 2018 5:09 am You either need to work on your grammar or have a proof reader. I can't get through more than a couple sentences with the way you type let alone a story lol
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so who are u thinking of writing about??slimshady_007 wrote: ↑Tue May 22, 2018 6:18 amTrust me, when i write a story i write properly. I type on this forum the way i text peopleFughedaboutit wrote: ↑Tue May 22, 2018 5:09 am You either need to work on your grammar or have a proof reader. I can't get through more than a couple sentences with the way you type let alone a story lol
I'd say go.w Lucchese
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no - do Rosario Naimo bc Mafia Wiki is horrible
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I was thinkin about a more recent gangster. Maybe al trucchio. I actually started a thread about him just recently. Another thing ive thought about writing about is the bonannos post joe massino. Like the whole mikey nose reign, queens -bronx conflict, etc. Imo its more fun to write about somethin that hasn’t been done to death. It leaves more to creativity.JeremyTheJew wrote: ↑Tue May 22, 2018 7:15 amso who are u thinking of writing about??slimshady_007 wrote: ↑Tue May 22, 2018 6:18 amTrust me, when i write a story i write properly. I type on this forum the way i text peopleFughedaboutit wrote: ↑Tue May 22, 2018 5:09 am You either need to work on your grammar or have a proof reader. I can't get through more than a couple sentences with the way you type let alone a story lol
I'd say go.w Lucchese
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